SchoclateSouce's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mouse Brothers - Risky Cheese]

in terms of timing and composition like you said you were practicing, what you did was alright. i didn't think the backgrounds were half bad either for what this is. as for reservations, the linework and animation could definitely use some work.

Kubopix responds:

yeah line works is in my list too,
thanks for the review.